Rejected Skilift : Easy [Resubmission]

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I have applied the changes described in the original rejection reason, please see changelog below.

Username: Enderbyte09
Map Name: Skilift
Plot Warp: /plot tp Enderbyte09
Difficulty: Easy
Number of Jumps: 34
Number of Checkpoints: 4
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Changes since initial submission
  • Fixed numerous exploits
  • Capped off lift building
  • Increased top/bottom consistency
  • Increased jump variety
  • Increased size
  • Added detail
  • Added slope
  • Cleaned up map overall
  • Reduced Barrier Count
=Update 2022-11-03 Changed one block to ice
=Updated 2022-11-04 Revamped operations building and layered snow
=Update 2022-11-05 Changed one block to chest, increased snow realism, updated pictures
=Update 2022-11-07 Heavily modified house thingy and redid beginning of parkour, also took some new pictures with shaders because it looks nicer.
=Update 2022-11-08 Heavily modified top and bottom stations of lift.
 

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the build for it is very basic. It's lacking details. the building are so small and feel like they took like less than 5 minutes
 

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I like this, but the house, the house for me really ruins the whole build. like sophia said just add more detail to the house
 

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Hello Enderbyte09,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The build is better, but it still looks very similar to maps that are already on the server (SkiResort and CableCar.) We also already have an abundance of snow related maps as well, and combined with the similarity to pre-existing maps, it doesn't really stand out a ton. A ski lodge theme might work out better with some additional details.
The parkour is better, well done there!

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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