Rejected TheWither (Hard)

[Inktest]

• Username: Inktest
• Map name: TheWither
• Photos of your Parkour:

  http://imgur.com/a/Vr9Y5Za

  (Album of photos)
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot visit Inktest 2
• Difficulty: Hard
• Number of jumps: 67

 

[Tas]

Unfortunately, maps about things in vanilla Minecraft will not be accepted anymore.

 

[MCBYT]

The parkour was fun, but it could definitely be improved if you varied the parkour a bit more with blocks like ladders, fences, water, slime, ice, etc and incorporated it more into the build (a lot of it is just floating). It was also a bit easy; personally, I think it'd be better as a medium.
The build is nice, but "3d pixel art" maps like this aren't accepted anymore, unfortunately. It is definitely accurate, though.
The theme of a wither is original, but again, the "3d pixel art" thing is holding it back quite a bit.

Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3

 

[MrBugs]

The parkour was fun, but it could definitely be improved if you varied the parkour a bit more with blocks like ladders, fences, water, slime, ice, etc and incorporated it more into the build (a lot of it is just floating). It was also a bit easy; personally, I think it'd be better as a medium.
The build is nice, but "3d pixel art" maps like this aren't accepted anymore, unfortunately. It is definitely accurate, though.
The theme of a wither is original, but again, the "3d pixel art" thing is holding it back quite a bit.

Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3

Actually, there already is a Wither map, I made one over a year ago and it was rejected for the same reason. Although I completely agree with everything else here

 

[MCBYT]

Actually, there already is a Wither map, I made one over a year ago and it was rejected for the same reason. Although I completely agree with everything else here

I was meaning amongst the added maps

 

[MrBugs]

I was meaning amongst the added maps

There is a Wither added map lol I was saying mine was rejected because there already was one XD

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Inktest,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as minecraft/minecraft mob themed maps have been very overdone. Please read over the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't bad. It is quite blocky, however it is accurate to a wither, and has a nice variety of blocks for detail.
The parkour is quite repetitive. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items in your jumps, it will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
A lot of the jumps were floating. Try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating over the void, this can make the map look quite messy.
The difficulty is good for a medium map, and the length is good for a hard map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.