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Hey there, before going ahead with your map submission review I'd like to inform you that I'm only giving you my personal opinion/feedback on your parkour map submission and my personal feedback will certainly not affect your parkour map submission in the slightest, I recommend that you take in my feedback to improve your submission if there are any flaws, you don't need to and you're free to ignore me but anyhow, before going ahead I'd like to mention that I'm a Moderator not a Map Judge so this is just my personal opinion and I am not accepting or denying your parkour map as this is only my personal opinion.
Design/theme: I'm assuming this might be something or a reference from the series 'Doctor Who' but I'm not so certain, I have seen some maps that look like this but I'm not exactly sure what your theme is so I can't really go off of other people's themes compared to yours, I do have to say it does look somewhat unique and seems you put some good detail into your parkour submission, great to see :D
Parkour difficulty/length: For the parkour length it's definitely too long, way too many jumps for medium and too many jumps for even an INSANE Map, I recommend cutting the number of jumps or upping the difficulty of your parkour map, for the parkour variety it's sadly quite bland, you've got some different blocks here and there but they are still pretty simple, I recommend adding more interesting jumps like common head hitters, head jumps, flower pot jumps, etc.
Have a good day!
Design/theme: I'm assuming this might be something or a reference from the series 'Doctor Who' but I'm not so certain, I have seen some maps that look like this but I'm not exactly sure what your theme is so I can't really go off of other people's themes compared to yours, I do have to say it does look somewhat unique and seems you put some good detail into your parkour submission, great to see :D
Parkour difficulty/length: For the parkour length it's definitely too long, way too many jumps for medium and too many jumps for even an INSANE Map, I recommend cutting the number of jumps or upping the difficulty of your parkour map, for the parkour variety it's sadly quite bland, you've got some different blocks here and there but they are still pretty simple, I recommend adding more interesting jumps like common head hitters, head jumps, flower pot jumps, etc.
Have a good day!
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Hey there! i am aware of this and yes the tardis is indeed from doctor who. In this map i have incorporated many different things from doctor who and i've spent around 11 hours working on it so im hoping it will still get accepted regardless of there being another somewhat relevant map :D thank you for your feedback!
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Hey LucyTheKnighty!
Unfortunately, this map is being rejected.
The build is pretty decent in most parts. I love the Dalek and I think that build itself could be its own map. I'm not very familiar with Doctor Who so I only know what a few of the builds are but they look fine to me. Theme is original considering its many objects unlike other maps such as TheTardis and SonicScrewdriver.
The parkour is not the best. It's varied in some spots but overly repetitive in the beginning with a large amount of ladders. Typically we encourage players to use a lot of unique blocks for variation. I recommend using heads, cactus, cakes, piston heads, piston bases. etc. The route you took is very confusing for players and you have a lot of barriers every where. Make sure you mark your barriers!
The jump from the flower pot to trapdoor is impossible. For the length, 126 jumps on a hard map is not the amount you want. You should be shooting for 50-60 for a hard map. There are also a lot of floating jumps. I can see you put a lot of effort into this map so I hope you completely revamp the parkour and look at hard maps such as Defunct.
Thank you for submitting this map, and please resubmit it when you fix the parkour completely.
- caseyclosed
Unfortunately, this map is being rejected.
The build is pretty decent in most parts. I love the Dalek and I think that build itself could be its own map. I'm not very familiar with Doctor Who so I only know what a few of the builds are but they look fine to me. Theme is original considering its many objects unlike other maps such as TheTardis and SonicScrewdriver.
The parkour is not the best. It's varied in some spots but overly repetitive in the beginning with a large amount of ladders. Typically we encourage players to use a lot of unique blocks for variation. I recommend using heads, cactus, cakes, piston heads, piston bases. etc. The route you took is very confusing for players and you have a lot of barriers every where. Make sure you mark your barriers!
The jump from the flower pot to trapdoor is impossible. For the length, 126 jumps on a hard map is not the amount you want. You should be shooting for 50-60 for a hard map. There are also a lot of floating jumps. I can see you put a lot of effort into this map so I hope you completely revamp the parkour and look at hard maps such as Defunct.
Thank you for submitting this map, and please resubmit it when you fix the parkour completely.
- caseyclosed
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