Accepted Cheese - Medium

[Ne0z_]

Builders: CheesyPeanutXL & Ne0z_
PkBuilder: worgenwow

Map name: Cheese

Jumps: 42
Checkpoints: 4


Plot: /plot v CheesyPeanutXL 2
Diff: Medium

 

[caseyclosed]

Cute build. I highly recommend recoloring the cheese as the blatant percentage pattern doesn't look very good. Maybe try tastefully shading with yellow wool, gold, and maybe even yellow clay.

 

[carvhes]

I'm gonna agree with Casey here, the texture should be done differently. The WE percentages never really look too good unless done perfectly right IMO. I'd try picking a point where a "sun" would be and using that to shade. Keep the side facing the sun lighter and make the back darker as you go on.

Lovely map tho!!

 

[Elly_x]

Heya,

I will be putting your map in ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello,

I will be putting your map into the reviewing stage. This means that your map isn't accepted or rejected. There are parts of your map that are solid but also parts that could be fixed before being fully accepted. You have until Feb 23rd to fix the needed changes or your map will be automatically rejected.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is amazing. Like I told the other judges, "the build is magical."

The PARKOUR was ok for the most part. Some jumps felt confusing, and would benefit from some directional signs. There was also some jumps that were a bit too hard for a medium map. This piston jump

http://imgur.com/02p1nfB

. This checkpoint as a whole

http://imgur.com/XwtK7kI

, This jump

http://imgur.com/fQEELWA

. A little nerf here

http://imgur.com/AxxGBgZ

. Directional aid here

http://imgur.com/zVfdP3c

. Mark the barrier here

http://imgur.com/f9nA2Nn

.

Thank you for taking the name to create this map, if you have any questions or have made the needed changes message me on discord at Elly#5555 so we can retest the map.
Elly

 

[Elly_x]

Hello,

Thank you for making the needed changes on your map! You map is now accepted, you have nerfed the needed jumps to make it more fit the difficulty. We did change a squeeze inside the map as we thought it was a bit too hard, now its more of a half neo.

I hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
Elly