Rejected FrootLoops - Medium

[Pris]

Build - Blororis
Parkour - killd
Difficulty - Medium
Jumps - 40
Checkpoints - 4
/plot h Blororis 13

 

[Bloro]

Was a fun collaboration with you Pris, hope you build more with you in the futute.

 

[Pris]

Hope to do more collabs as well in the futute :D

 

[PyroTortilla]

Hello,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING your map submission:

Theme: The theme is original, so good job on that regard - I don't believe we have any cereal-themed maps.
Build: The build is pretty mediocre - the top of the bowl has very few Fruit Loops and too much open space - I'd recommend adding more of the actual cereal or maybe making the pre-existing cereal bigger just to add some more color to the dominantly white build. Also, the entire middle section of the map is very boring - it feels like I'm just parkouring around an open space instead of a bowl of cereal, and you should increase the light sources because it's pretty hard to see the button and read the signs.
Parkour: The parkour was appropriate for the difficulty and was a decent length, so GG on that. However, maybe re-mapping the parkour to make more use of the top of the bowl instead of almost all on the inside would make this better.

I hope to see more map submissions from the both of you in the future, and have a great day!