Rejected NorwegianDelicacies - Easy

[Pris]

since the norwegian independence day was 3 days ago, I wanted to make a map based on norwegian delicacies

Creator - Prisioner
Jumps - 29
Checkpoints - 3
/plot h Prisioner 11

 

[Pris]

i added a tray and added shadows, thanks to tips from mma discord!!
also thanks to eme for testing this map

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Prisioner,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[FireWolf1985]

the theme is creative

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Prisioner,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original; we already have food maps but this is a very unique take on it.
The build is one of the concerns. Overall, it just feels a bit bland. The tray itself could be improved with better coloration, as well as the build feeling a bit flat overall. The turkey/chicken also look a bit inaccurate.
The parkour also feels very rushed, and a lot of the jumps are inconsistent for the difficulty/not enough error margin for jumps (i.e single glass pane, cocoa bean, etc.) The map also has a ton of skips throughout. In addition to this, the water/pane jump on the flag is not possible in 1.18.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!