Hello Moang,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original as we do not have a Yggdrasil map, well done.
The build is a concern. As mentioned above, it needs to be smoother and look less like everything was worldedited.
The parkour is the main concern. 420 jumps is way too many for an insane map, and 5 checkpoints is way too few. As also mentioned above, try to keep it below 200 jumps and also make sure you split up your checkpoints more to make the map more enjoyable.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!