Rejected PufferFishMan- A hard map

[Chicken]

Hi, this is a mpa made by me (SoccerChicken50) and my friend Minester1234. We made it together at my plot (ID: -95;-11). It isn't specifically based off of anything, just a made up 'superhero'. It has 62 jumps and 5 checkpoints. Any advice and feedback is greatly appreciated. We hope that you like it.

 

[Pris]

:D You got that idea from me

 

[Chicken]

:D You got that idea from me

It is a familiar face isn’t it?Robert has truly evolved

 

[Pris]

can you prob give me cred for coming up With the idea?

 

[Chicken]

can you prob give me cred for coming up With the idea?

Of course. I’ll do it when I’m next on. Sorry lol

 

[Pris]

Of course. I’ll do it when I’m next on. Sorry lol

No problem!

 

[khirina]

really not in the mood to produce coherent thoughts on this lovely Tuesday evening. Instead, i found some fat skips:

You can literally just skip the entire cape. Put barrier blocks on the greem

Harder to perform, but still pretty easy and skips like 60% of the map. put barriers on green

will update if i find more ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

edit:

 

[Chicken]

Hey khirina, thanks so much for the reply. I’ll look to change them asap. Thank you. :)

 

[Chicken]

No problem!

I've added your head at the spawn now so people can see it. Thanks for the idea and sorry for not putting it in. Hope that's okay for you :)

 

[Chicken]

really not in the mood to produce coherent thoughts on this lovely Tuesday evening. Instead, i found some fat skips: View attachment 29914
You can literally just skip the entire cape. Put barrier blocks on the greem

View attachment 29915
Harder to perform, but still pretty easy and skips like 60% of the map. put barriers on green

will update if i find more ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

edit:

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UPDATE:
I have now fixed these skips with barriers. If anyone spots anymore when testing it, please let me know and I’ll fix it as soon as possible :)

 

[khirina]

honestly the cape PK should just be redone. It's just skippable in so many ways

also barrier block on the head or there will always be a skip in that part

 

[Pris]

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I've added your head at the spawn now so people can see it. Thanks for the idea and sorry for not putting it in. Hope that's okay for you :)

No problem bro!

 

[Chicken]

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honestly the cape PK should just be redone. It's just skippable in so many ways

also barrier block on the head or there will always be a skip in that part

I think that I’ve fully blocked those off... with some minor changes to the surface of the cape. I’m planning on having a look at it tomorrow to make sure. Thanks so much for the feedback again

 

[GamersDecision]

-1 build not hot

Did you have any other pieces of advice for the creators? xD Your answer is kinda empty and giving a -1 only for the build seems a little obnoxious. This is how I think anyway, I could be wrong!

 

[Chicken]

-1 build not hot

Is there anything else lol? It doesn’t have to be in nice words. Just what you don’t like about the build so that I can retry and start again. :)

 

[GamersDecision]

Is there anything else lol? It doesn’t have to be in nice words. Just what you don’t like about the build so that I can retry and start again. :)

I'll review your map once I get home unless the map is already judged! I sadly can't play until Sunday.

 

[Chicken]

I'll review your map once I get home unless the map is already judged! I sadly can't play until Sunday.

That’s okay, there’s no hurry. Thank you a lot.

 

[GamersDecision]

Hello SoccerChicken and Minester!
I am here to give you my review of the map! Please remember that I am not a map judge and my opinion has no effect on whether the map gets accepted or not, I'm just trying to give helpful advice!

Firstly I think the theme is EXCELLENT. There definitely isn't a map about a pufferfish superhero and it requires quite the imagination to think of an idea like this. Amazing work on the theme!
Secondly the build of your map is GOOD. It definitely does look like a pufferfish superhero and it is really detailed! It's quite visible that a lot of effort went into this map's build! My only beef is that the head looks quite small compared to the actual character's body but this might just be a builder's take and not really "an issue"
Lastly the parkour of your map is OKAY. It mostly fit a hard map's difficulty, was of appropriate length, had enough checkpoints and was somewhat varied as well! However I feel like the parkour could be a little more varied at parts with different jumps and elements to the parkour. I also find the difficulty to be somewhat inconsistent, the part with the water and the part before that with the corner jumps as an example are much harder than the rest of the map. There's also one shortcut on the cape that needs to be fixed! (There might be more of course!) I have marked the correct path with a green color and the skip path with a black color.

Good luck! :D

 

[Pris]

Hello SoccerChicken and Minester!
I am here to give you my review of the map! Please remember that I am not a map judge and my opinion has no effect on whether the map gets accepted or not, I'm just trying to give helpful advice!

Firstly I think the theme is EXCELLENT. There definitely isn't a map about a pufferfish superhero and it requires quite the imagination to think of an idea like this. Amazing work on the theme!
Secondly the build of your map is GOOD. It definitely does look like a pufferfish superhero and it is really detailed! It's quite visible that a lot of effort went into this map's build! My only beef is that the head looks quite small compared to the actual character's body but this might just be a builder's take and not really "an issue"
Lastly the parkour of your map is OKAY. It mostly fit a hard map's difficulty, was of appropriate length, had enough checkpoints and was somewhat varied as well! However I feel like the parkour could be a little more varied at parts with different jumps and elements to the parkour. I also find the difficulty to be somewhat inconsistent, the part with the water and the part before that with the corner jumps as an example are much harder than the rest of the map. There's also one shortcut on the cape that needs to be fixed! (There might be more of course!) I have marked the correct path with a green color and the skip path with a black color. View attachment 30208

Good luck! :D

My imagination is the best lol

 

[khirina]

My imagination is the best lol

how do u think so good bro? im jealous