Accepted Helibird - Medium

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/plot v bird

A spoonful of jumps
A pottle of checkpoints
A furlong of hours spent
A gill of testers
A pennyweigh of armor stands
A fathom of blocks

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i would of thought you'd of at least heard the word
 

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Heya,

I will be putting your map in ONGOING as I have tested and reviewed your map. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team.

If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
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Hello,

I will be putting your map into the reviewing stage. This means that your map isn't accepted or rejected. There are parts of your map that are solid but also parts that could be fixed before being fully accepted. You have until April 30th to fix the needed changes or your map will be automatically rejected.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a ok. The overall shaping and execution is good. The place that needs some working is the texturing and the floating columns around. On the build itself, the texture seems to be overdoing it causing it to be more distracting than helpful. The parkour columns, especially with the redstone torches on it, takes away from the build and again causes distractions.

The PARKOUR for the most part is nice and fun. The map is a bit short for a medium, with only 32 jumps, and also a bit too hard. I recommend nerfing the parkour to either fit more towards a medium or change the difficulty to an easy to fit the length. This sign here , doesn't really makes sense to how the jump is executed.

Thank you for taking the name to create this map, if you have any questions or have made the needed changes message me on discord at Elly#5555 so we can retest the map.
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the redstone torches stay

i will fight for them.
 

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Hello.

Thank you for making the needed changes on your map! You map is now accepted, it is now accurate to a medium in difficulty and length. We did remove the redstone torches as all comm judges and map judges agreed they needed to go.

I hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555.
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