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- Thread starter Inktest
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Right now it's a -0,5 from me
+ The theme has never been done before which is good
+ I like the concept of not building the actual console
+ It suits the easy difficulty well
- Build is plain, most is wool and pixel art, which is boring
- Parkour has a lot of unnecessary walking and jumping
- Parkour is also pretty repetitve and not varied
I think you can improve this map by making the controller 3D and more parkour/ less walking
Good luck!
+ The theme has never been done before which is good
+ I like the concept of not building the actual console
+ It suits the easy difficulty well
- Build is plain, most is wool and pixel art, which is boring
- Parkour has a lot of unnecessary walking and jumping
- Parkour is also pretty repetitve and not varied
I think you can improve this map by making the controller 3D and more parkour/ less walking
Good luck!
The build is alright, as Pres said I really like that you chose to go with the logo instead of the console, but I think it would be even better if you made the controller 3d instead of pixel art. It's also a bit bland in terms of block variation; maybe try adding some shading?
The parkour is mostly repetitive, and there's a few skippable jumps that you might want to entirely remove as well. I think the difficulty and length (once extra jumps are removed) fit the difficulty well, though.
The theme of game consoles isn't fully original as it's been done on maps like GameBoy and NintendoSwitch, but the unique build saves you somewhat.
Overall, +0. Good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
The parkour is mostly repetitive, and there's a few skippable jumps that you might want to entirely remove as well. I think the difficulty and length (once extra jumps are removed) fit the difficulty well, though.
The theme of game consoles isn't fully original as it's been done on maps like GameBoy and NintendoSwitch, but the unique build saves you somewhat.
Overall, +0. Good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
Hello Inktest,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme of game consoles isn't original, but there aren't any maps exactly like this, so that part of it is original.
The build isn't great, it looks quite blocky, and a bit like a 3d pixel art. I would suggest trying to add a bit more shape and definition to it.
The parkour is quite repetitive. Majority of the jumps are normal blocks and ladders. I would suggest experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
You implemented the jumps into the build well. There aren't too many floating jumps, so well done!
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme of game consoles isn't original, but there aren't any maps exactly like this, so that part of it is original.
The build isn't great, it looks quite blocky, and a bit like a 3d pixel art. I would suggest trying to add a bit more shape and definition to it.
The parkour is quite repetitive. Majority of the jumps are normal blocks and ladders. I would suggest experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
You implemented the jumps into the build well. There aren't too many floating jumps, so well done!
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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