Rejected EmeraldLockdown

[EmeraldLockdown]

The Steps of Minecraft Survival

ID: 144; -104
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[Garby721]

Hi, I tryed the map and this is my feedback. The them is unoriginal, the parkour pretty boring, and buildings ugly.
Try to choose maybe another theme, and use a bigger variety of jumps and blocks. Buildings are not good because they are just boxes, try to add details, create an atmosphere.
I hope this comment will help you, and I hope you will keep trying with maps creations.

 

[.....]

Hey! As awesome as it is that you're submitting a map, I would encourage you to read this post to get a better idea of what to shoot for in a parkour map, since as of right now this does not match many of the requirements.

Have a great day!

 

[Proteges]

Hey there, EmeraldLockdown

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Theme: For your theme, I'm classifying this as an unoriginal attempt. Your theme looks pretty generic to a biome type theme that many different parkour maps on ManaCube have.

Build: Your build is very basic and there isn't much detail/effort put into your parkour map submission.

Parkour: Your parkour is pretty bland/boring and there aren't really any interesting blocks/parkour jumps incorporated into your manacube parkour map submission, for future reference, I suggest you use more interesting types of blocks such as anvil jumps, chest/enchantment table jumps, etc.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord

 

[Pris]

Hey there, EmeraldLockdown

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.
Theme: For your theme, I'm classifying this as an unoriginal attempt. Your theme looks pretty generic to a biome type theme that many different parkour maps on ManaCube have.

Build: Your build is very basic and there isn't much detail/effort put into your parkour map submission.

Parkour: Your parkour is pretty bland/boring and there aren't really any interesting blocks/parkour jumps incorporated into your manacube parkour map submission, for future reference, I suggest you use more interesting types of blocks such as anvil jumps, chest/enchantment table jumps, etc.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord

uh maybe put the rejected tag on it @Proteges (ThePro) ?