Hey rah,
I'm sorry to say your map has been rejected
The theme is original, so good job on that!
The build looks a bit messy, it could be better (for the first rooms, concrete powder doesn't really look good, with black + gray)
The parkour still isn't good. It's hard at parts to know where to go, and with the abudance of barriers there are some jumps that are unfair to jump to. The parkour feels unfun to play and its difficulty increases over time, it's a bit inconsistent.
If you have any questions, you may msg me here or on Discord (Inktest#youknowthedeal)
Have a nice day!